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Zoe2008

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Because factory A was closed since last month and we still looking for the other factory to replace their production and many problem for the tooling .... etc, you should more clear than me. Therefore Amy decided to cancel two POs of xxx and xxx. Could you please advise this to the customer.
 

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Factory A has been closed since last month and we are still looking for another factory to take over production. Then, we can anticipate problems in gearing up the tooling etc,

you should more clear than me.
You are informing this person about problems ie it suggests this person doesn't know about them. Then you say, 'you should be clearer (about all this than me)
Does this person know all about the factory closing etc??

Therefore, Amy decided to cancel two POs of xxx and xxx. Would you please advise the customer of this?
 

Zoe2008

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Hi David,

you should more clear than me.
You are informing this person about problems ie it suggests this person doesn't know about them. Then you say, 'you should be clearer (about all this than me)
Does this person know all about the factory closing etc?? Yes, you are correct

Thank you for your correction

Regards
Zoe
 
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