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hi every one

i have a propsal for my research paper

can any one help me to correct my mistakes

thank you

i'm waiting

that it is:

the first thing title i choose this one but my teacher doesnt accept it
Critics Contradictory Opinion


i'm going to write about the critics i the novel that i read

the last one is ( i wrote the question of the research is how can i support each opinion?
she told me rewrite it and expline it .

that is it....
 

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Hi [STRIKE]every one [/STRIKE] everyone

I have a propsal for my research paper.

Can [STRIKE]any one[/STRIKE] anyone help me to correct my mistakes?

Thank you

[STRIKE]i'm waiting[/STRIKE]

The problems:

The first thing - the title - I ch[STRIKE]o[/STRIKE]ose this one but my teacher [STRIKE]doesnt[/STRIKE] didn't accept it :

Critics Contradictory Opinion


I'm going to write about the critics i ?????? the novel that i read

The [STRIKE]last[/STRIKE] second one [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] - I wrote the question of the research [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] as "How can I support each opinion?"

She told me to rewrite it and [STRIKE]expline[/STRIKE] explain it.

[STRIKE]that is it...[/STRIKE]

That's all.

Please see the corrections to your entire post in red above.

I don't actually understand what the subject of your research is. You have read a novel and you want to talk about the different critics (people) who have criticised the novel? If so, a better title would be "Contradictory Critical Opinions of [name of novel]".

The specific question for your research seems to be something like "How can I back up/show each opinion?" though I don't know if that's what you mean. Are you planning to show your support for all the different opinions?
 
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