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[qween]

write about someone you admire (use adjectives & count & noncount & prepositions)
please help me its the first time that i ask for help
give it on tusday 30\3\2010
please help me :-cry::-?

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[Barb_D]

Hi qween,

As you know, we don't do assignments for people. Write your essay and post it here and someone will take a look.

Figure out who you want to write about.
Write down three things you admire about that person.
Then build your essay around those ideas.

 

[qween]

We all have someone in our family who we most admire. From my perspective these people are essential for us as we have somebody to look up to. In my case, the person I esteem the most is certainly my grandfather, whose life story inspires me and even helps me to pursue a better life.
He was born in Al-Darayh , a small village in Riyadh. He is smart and extremely confident and it is always a pleasure to hear his life experiences.
I aspire to follow in his footsteps so that I can be a better person and guarantee a successful future for myself.

 

[Anglika]

We do noy do your homework for you. You do your own work abd we can then comment on it.

Also, line up your text to the left of the page; use capital letters in the correct places; do not use very large type; do not use red.

 

[Barb_D]

That seems pretty good to me. You might want to add a sentence about something he did that impressed you. It could be something professional (he started his own business) or something personal (no matter how busy he was, he always had time for his family), etc.