Holding a glass of red wine

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Bassim

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I am wondering if my sentences are grammatically correct?

Holding a glass of red wine, Kate opened the French windows and stepped into the garden. The summer night was starry and quiet; the silence broken only by an ambulance siren.
 

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The semicolon should be a comma.
 
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