how aboout my resume? could u give me some suggestion?

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RESUME
Personal Information
Full name: Wong Pei
English name: Chanel
Gender: Female
Place of Birth: Shanghai, China
Date of Birth: 16 May 1982
Means of Communication: Home Telephone: 021-64668184
Mobil Phone: 13817566092
E-mail: angel_chanel@sohu.com
Address: Room 504 Building A No.555 Nan Chang Road Shanghai 200031
Education
l 2000-2005 Bachelor Degree of Economics, International Economics and Trade, Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce, Shanghai University, Shanghai, China.
l 1997-2000 Fu Dan Senior High School, outstanding League branch Secretary.
Work Experience
l 2002 Summer Vacation Administrative Assistant, YanZhong Ltd. Company Vehicle Accessories, Shanghai. Managing sales documents and files, providing quality after-sales service.
l October 2002 Volunteer for the social whip-round, YinXin Cultural Co. Ltd.
Summary of Qualifications
l Native Chinese Speaker, fluent in Mandarin and Shanghainese. Excellent English with proficiency in listening, speaking£¬reading, and writing.
Relevant certificates:
1.July 2003 Certificate IV in English Studies-SILC Program issued by Insearch of University of Technology, Sydney
2.March 2003 Certificate for State College English Test ¨C Level 6
3September 2002 Passed the written exams of English Middle-level Accredited Interpreter Certificate
3.March 2002 Certificate for State College English Test ¨CLevel 4
l Skillful in computer operation, such as Word, Excel, PowerPoint, etc.
l Ability to write commercial plan and business report both in English and Chinese independently. Included < The Comparisons of Securities Trading Online Between China and Foreign Countries >. <Marketing plan Report>.
l Confident and conscientious. Easily adjust to the new environment and handled with interpersonal relationship.
l Perfect communication skills and organizational skills.
l Patient and great endurance.
Self Recommendation
I am a bright, cheerful and lively girl, and willing to accept the challenge under the new environment very much. I can bear hardships and do everything with patience and conscientiousness. Also good communication, language ability is available. I can treat others quite well with affinity. I would like to adjust myself to adapt to the development under the new environment.
 

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Means of Communication: Home Telephone: 021-64668184

I'd delete 'Means of Communication'- it's unnecessary as most people know what a phone is. 'Contact Details' might be the phrase you're looking for.

PS- I wouldn't use the word 'girl' in a resume. ;-)
 
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