How about the ballads?

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NewHope

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(If possible, improve it please)

(1)
The waning moon is shining over the vast land,

Joys and sadness divide the world so distinct;

Merrymakers on high towers are people with wealth,

Drifting the world are those miserably helpless.

(2)

The Moon-light streams over the vast land,
A few smile and a few wail,
Many debauching on high floor,
Many wandering on the road.

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Which one is better?
 

Tdol

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I'd use 2, but take the first line from 1
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