NewHope
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jul 29, 2004
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
(If possible, improve it please)
(1)
The waning moon is shining over the vast land,
Joys and sadness divide the world so distinct;
Merrymakers on high towers are people with wealth,
Drifting the world are those miserably helpless.
(2)
The Moon-light streams over the vast land,
A few smile and a few wail,
Many debauching on high floor,
Many wandering on the road.
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Which one is better?
(1)
The waning moon is shining over the vast land,
Joys and sadness divide the world so distinct;
Merrymakers on high towers are people with wealth,
Drifting the world are those miserably helpless.
(2)
The Moon-light streams over the vast land,
A few smile and a few wail,
Many debauching on high floor,
Many wandering on the road.
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Which one is better?