how can I improve my literary style in writng

[rooose]

hello,
can you help me & tell me how can I improve my literary style in writng :-|??????
coz my doctors always ask us to writ in litrary style or they wiil cut of my mark:-(..


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Is rught grammatically to say:I'm rooose, who called you on Sunday,...

or what can I say instead of who?

thaaaaaaaank you very much :-D

 

[Anglika]

hello,
Can you help me & tell me how can I improve my literary style in writng :-|??????
because my doctors always ask us to writ in literary style or they will cut off my mark:-(..

Practice - and lots of reading. Writing grammatically and correctly will help you.

Try writing short pieces and posting them in the forum for Editing & Writing Topics for people to comment.


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Is right grammatically to say:I'm Rooose, who called you on Sunday,...

or what can I say instead of who? It is correct.

thaaaaaaaank you very much :-D

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