how to arrange these sentences

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I'm writing an article and have a problem with how to arrange these repeated sentence.

"Regardless of the types of the defect, the mean defect size was 2.2±0.9 cm. The mean pressure was 54.9±22.9 mmHg. The mean Qp/Qs was 4.8±2.8 (Table XX)."

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I'm not entirely certain whether this would be correct, but here's my take:

"Regardless of the types of the defect, we/I found that the mean defect size was 2.2±0.9 cm. Additionally, the mean pressure was 54.9±22.9 mmHg, the mean Qp/Qs 4.8±2.8 (Table XX)."

Or...

"Regardless of the types of the defect, the mean defect size was 2.2±0.9 cm; the mean pressure was 54.9±22.9 mmHg; while the mean Qp/Qs was 4.8±2.8 (Table XX)."

Again, don't take my word for it. I may be right, I may be wrong.
 
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