How to improve my written style?

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Maluues

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Good evening.

1 month ago I wrote a classwork about the American Dream.
I thought that I would get a bad mark which has not been the case.
So in generally I was and I still am very happy. But there is one thing which has been bothering me since this time.
My "style". I read a lot of books (fantasy, thriller, novels and so on) but my style won't improve and I hate this....

Is there anything which can improve my style?

And there is another question I would like to ask you.

If the subject of a sentence is "everybody" have I to lead on this sentence with "one" or "his"?

Thanks for your help.

Ps: Are there any mistakes in my post?
 

Anglika

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There is only one way to improve and that is constant practice. Post your writings in the forum for Writing and Editing and someone will comment.

Your question about "everybody" - the pronoun will depend on the context in which you use it, but it is generally regarded as a plural. Can you provide sentences as examples of how you want to use it?
 

Maluues

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Hey Anglika.
Thanks for your help. I would like to post more writings in this forum but I do not know about which subjects I could write.
Do you have any ideas? On the one hand I could post daily a diary entry. But on the other hand this would be too personal.

To my second question. Especially in our last classwork I had a lot of mistakes base on using "one" or "his". I will edit the sentences later on in this post because I am going to eat something right now :>.

Thanks for your help

Maluues
 

Snowcake

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Hi Maluues,

just look for words. Economy, environmental pollution, fashion, music, art, holiday etc.
You can write anything about a subject depending on what you are interested in.
We are practising it in our CAE course. Write down something about 'music' in the next 2 minutes ---> brainstorming. Afterwards we have to write an essay (1 page) about the topic.

Regards,
Snowcake
 
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