How to say these sentences in a formal way?

[jomo27]

Please correct these sentences.
Thanks!

1. Well, I think all the teachers in my foundation course don't really know about the BPA. *BPA = Bachelor of Performing Arts

2. Do they accept foreigners to be one of the actors/actress in their country?

3. Can foreigners join the Australian entertainment? Like in Tv commercials, movies, short-dramas, etc.

 

[Anglika]

Please correct these sentences.
Thanks!

1. Well, I think all the teachers in my foundation course don't really know about the BPA. *BPA = Bachelor of Performing Arts I do not think the teachers on my foundation course know about the BPA

2. Do they accept foreigners to be one of the actors/actress in their country?
Do they accept foreigners as actors in their country?

3. Can foreigners join the Australian entertainment? Like in Tv commercials, movies, short-dramas, etc. Will foreigners in Australia be able to find acting work in things like tv commercials, movies, or short dramas?

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[jomo27]

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Thanks a lot.