how to write a business inquiry?

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jctgf

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hi,

when looking for accommodation, i am used to sending messages with the following style to the landlords:

dear sir,

i have a few questions about your unit:

is the bathroom a shared or a private one?
is there any internet service available?
are all costs included in your price?
could you please inform the unit zip code?

thanks a lot,
joao

i try not to be too short and not excessively wordy as well, but it's hard to find the ideal point.

is the text in bold OK?

thanks a lot,
JC
 

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A bit abrupt, but to the point.

nb: "Could you please let me know the the unit's zip code".
 

jctgf

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A bit abrupt, but to the point.

nb: "Could you please let me know the the unit's zip code".


Hi,

Thanks! What should I change in order to make it more friendly but still objective?

Thanks again,
JC
 
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