Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
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- Bosnia Herzegovina
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- Sweden
I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct.
Hundreds of youths had been camping out to buy tickets to a new Harry Potter film. Jim, an old man, who passed by, stared at them in disbelief. "I'm glad I'm not young any more," he muttered and shuffled on.
Hundreds of youths had been camping out to buy tickets to a new Harry Potter film. Jim, an old man, who passed by, stared at them in disbelief. "I'm glad I'm not young any more," he muttered and shuffled on.
