I am lonely, it blows with winds and sins

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Volcano1985

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I am lonely, it blows with winds and sins.

Correct grammatically and makes sense?
 

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It doesn't make sense to me-what does it refer to?
 

Volcano1985

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My being lonely, what else can I say? That?
 

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I think it works, as a poetic verse, but not a very clear one.
 
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