I climbed out of the ditch

[Bassim]

This sentence is from a short story I am currently writing. I am not sure about the place of "on all fours"in my sentence. Would you please correct the mistakes?

I climbed out of the ditch on all fours onto the soft shoulder.

Or should be instead like this:

I climbed out of the ditch onto the soft shoulder on all fours.

 

[teechar]

I climbed out of the ditch, on all fours, onto the soft shoulder.

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[emsr2d2]

Instead of the combination of "climbed" and "on all fours" you could just say "I crawled out of the ditch onto the soft shoulder".