I love my room and my only window that shows the nature.

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"I live in a small village and I love my home. Especially, I love my room and my only window that shows the nature."
Is the bold phrase correct?
 
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No, it's not. Are you trying to say that you have a view of the countryside from your window?
 
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How about something like I love my room with its one window looking out on nature?
 
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I love my room with its one window overlooking the countryside.
 
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The suggestions by Tdol and Matthew Wai are good.
 
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