I need help in deciding the key supports of my thesis

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Hi ppl I need your help. I am writing an essay about cross-border and online prescription drugs trade. My position in my thesis statement is this trade being beneficial to all the players of it. I have also racked up some research notes on the topic from statistics and opinions that supports both sides found in newspaper and magazine articles. However, I am having trouble deciding which key points I should point out in my essay. Please give me some feedbacks! Thank you.
 

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Without knowing which points you wish to make, it is hard to prioritise them.;-)
 
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Can anyone please suggest more key points so that I can categorize my notes? Here are the key points that I've identified:

against cross-border prescription drug trade: shortages, safety
support cross-border prescription drug trade: rising drug prices, employment opportunities, tax dollars generation, ensured safety
neutral stuff: price facts and its flow chart, interests of all the players, Statistics Canada stats, public policy of price control
 

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Prakinator said:
Can anyone please suggest more key points so that I can categorize my notes? Here are the key points that I've identified:

against cross-border prescription drug trade: shortages, safety
support cross-border prescription drug trade: rising drug prices, employment opportunities, tax dollars generation, ensured safety
neutral stuff: price facts and its flow chart, interests of all the players, Statistics Canada stats, public policy of price control

You may want to do your homeowork in detail.
 
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