i need help on a potted critical comment!!

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i am trying to write a potted critical comment for the scythe, i have to mention mankinds obsession with the darker side of life and pessimism
 

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So how do you think you will start it off?
 

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What's a "potted critical comment"?

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'Potted' means 'brief' in BE, but I'm not sure I grasp the question fully. ;-)
 

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If it's supposed to be brief then you have to avoid redundancy, and "obsession with the darker side of life and pessimism" seems to me to be already redundant.

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