I need help

[PlacidRan]

I'm writing a novel and need help. What's correct:

1) "Yeah, baby, I like you, too."

2) "Yeah baby, I like you, too."

 

[PlacidRan]

Baby here means a grown girl or a woman, not an infant.

 

[bhaisahab]

I'm writing a novel and need help. What's correct:

1) "Yeah, baby, I like you, too."

2) "Yeah baby, I like you, too."

#2 is better in my opinion.

 

[PlacidRan]

Thank you (noted). I have another question. Would it be grammatically correct to say:

1) Angry again I decided to hurt him. (without a comma after again?)

 

[bhaisahab]

Thank you (noted). I have another question. Would it be grammatically correct to say:

1) Angry again I decided to hurt him. (without a comma after again?)

No, you need the comma.

 

[PlacidRan]

I see. Thanks.