[FONT=.VnTime]Please edit these following sentence from lyric of a song which my friend has just written as soon as possible ( Grammar, word-choice, and so on) . Thanks in advance[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]When I wake up in the morning,[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]You're the first thing on my mind'[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]Then I'm online to look for your messenger[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]Then I realize, I'm just a man[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]With no money and no handsomeness[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]So, My darling, I'll have to wait for you...[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]You help me when I'm lost[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]You make me feel so strong...[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]you 're my life, my darling[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]I'm lonely without you my darling...[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]When I wake up in the morning,[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]You're the first thing on my mind'[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]Then I'm online to look for your messenger[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]Then I realize, I'm just a man[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]With no money and no handsomeness[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]So, My darling, I'll have to wait for you...[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]You help me when I'm lost[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]You make me feel so strong...[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]you 're my life, my darling[/FONT]
[FONT=.VnTime]I'm lonely without you my darling...[/FONT]