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In general, people can perform their gained skills when they grow up. In fact, in early ages people can develop interesting solutions in their fantasy world. On the other hand, children and adults neither have experience that can make dreams true nor have conditions or opportunity. However, several challenging and ambitious spirit of researchers can perform their ideals in advance.
In this sense, the fantasy world of secondary school students is very important because especially in this age they learn how to produce solutions to the problem at every stage of life.
That's why it"s important to realize the potential of these active brains in the appropriate research environment and take their excitement into control by the experienced teachers.
So that every young person can analize and solve problems on his own.The thing that Edison was most afraid of was darkness. By inventing a lamp he gained a great convenience for himself as well as for mankind.
Scientific activities are done with these feelings, thoughts, with enthusiasm and excitement at ... School
Model rockets, model planes, NASA tenis projects, are carried out by our students in many areas of scientific activity.
Moreover, our students prepeare physics, chemistry, biology and mathematics to participate in the national and international Olimpic competitions .During the week and at the weekends they work with their Olympic counselor.

 

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In general, people can perform their gained skills when they grow up. In fact, in early ages people can develop (or come up with) interesting solutions in their fantasy world. On the other hand, children and adults neither have experience that can make dreams true nor have conditions or opportunity. However, several challenging and ambitious [STRIKE]spirit of [/STRIKE]researchers can perform their ideals in advance.
In this sense, the fantasy world of secondary school students is very important because, especially atthis age, they learn how to produce (or find out) solutions to the problem at every stage of life.
That's why it"s important to realize the potential of these active brains in the appropriate research environment and take their excitement into control by the experienced teachers, so that every young person can analize and solve problems on his own.The thing that Edison was most afraid of was darkness. By inventing a lamp, a great convenience was gained for himself as well as for mankind.
Scientific activities are performed with these feelings, thoughts, [STRIKE]with[/STRIKE] enthusiasm and excitement at ... School
Model rockets, model planes, NASA tenis projects, are carried out by our students in many areas of scientific activity.
Moreover, our students participate in the national and international Olimpic competitions in the field of physics, chemistry, biology and mathematics.During the week and at the weekends they work with their Olympic counselor.