I rest during walks ...

melania_87

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Need a help! with sentences! Are they correct?

"I rest during walks with my doughter and when I watch tv series."
"In my new office I take care about relations with clients and creating meetings."
 

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Re: kindly ask for check two sentences

I need [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] (no article required) help (no exclamation mark here) with two sentences. Are they correct?

"I rest during walks with my daughter and when I watch [STRIKE]tv[/STRIKE] TV series."
"In my new office, I [STRIKE]take care about[/STRIKE] am responsible for maintaining relationships with clients and [STRIKE]creating[/STRIKE] setting up meetings."

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

See my corrections above. I have made your sentences grammatically correct but the first sentence doesn't make sense. If you're walking with your daughter, you're not resting.
 

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Re: kindly ask for check two sentences

For the first one, try:
I find it relaxing to go for walks with my daughter and when I watch TV.
 

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Melania, please note that I have changed your thread title.

Extract from the Posting Guidelines:

'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'

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Are you sure you're in Italy?
 

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Thank you!!!
 

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Thank you. [STRIKE]!!![/STRIKE]
There is no need to make a new post to say 'Thank you'. Just click the 'Thank' button in the bottom left-hand corner of any post you find useful.

Again: are you sure you're in Italy? If not, please amend your profile.
 
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