I think that this university can pave the way for both educational and career achieve

[newkeenlearner]

Is "career" wrong here? what is an appropriate word? is "occupational" OK?

I think that this XYZ University can pave the way for both educational and career achievements.

 

[teechar]

Is "career" wrong here? What is an [STRIKE]appropriate[/STRIKE] alternative word? Is "occupational" OK?

I think that this XYZ University can pave the way for both educational and career achievements.

The whole thing sounds like waffle. Also, if XYZ is the name of the university, omit "this."

 

[newkeenlearner]

The whole thing sounds like waffle.

Thanks Teechar. Actually my teacher asked me to write a sentence with "pave the way" in a class. Maybe that's why it sounds waffle.
I feel that Cambridge University can pave the way for both educational and career achievements.

My teacher said that "career" is wrong, and only "occupation" is a good collocation in this sentence, so he marked it as a wrong word.