[Vocabulary] I want alternative to 'I learn important thing form that experience.

[saloom2]

Hello everyone,

I am writing a letter to a friend telling him about my new TV my brother broke down.

on of the examiner's questions is 'what you learnt from the experience?' I want to alter this answer because I think it's not well-expressed.

"I do really learn an important thing from that experience; don't ever let you your little brother deal with a precious item, and if he want to do anything with it, I should do it myself"

Thanks in advance.

 

[saloom2]

Any help, please?

 

[emsr2d2]

How can you change an examiner's question?

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello everyone,

I am writing a letter to a friend telling him about my new TV which my brother broke. [STRIKE]down[/STRIKE].

One of the examiner's questions is 'What have you learnt from the experience?' I want to alter this question because I think it's not well-expressed. (There is certainly a word missing, which I have added.)

"I [STRIKE]do[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]really[/STRIKE] learnt [STRIKE]an[/STRIKE] a really important thing from that experience; don't ever let [STRIKE]you[/STRIKE] your little brother [STRIKE]deal with[/STRIKE] touch a [STRIKE]precious[/STRIKE] valuable item, and if [STRIKE]he[/STRIKE] I want to do anything with it, I should do it myself."

Thanks in advance.

Please see the amendments I have made to your post. If you have copied the examiner's question correctly, then there was certainly a word missing. I don't understand why you wanted to alter the question, rather than simply correct it.

 

[saloom2]

I'm so sorry! Studying is stressing me out! And 'question' should have been 'Answer'.

 

[Tdol]

on of the examiner's questions is 'what you learnt from the experience?' I want to alter this answer because I think it's not well-expressed.

I agree- I would use What did you learn/have you learnt from the experience?