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[rachna]

Hi I m new to this site .I do not know how to write . I want to close the telephone connection .please disconnect it as soon as possible. would u please check it and tell me how these can be write

 

[emsr2d2]

Hi. I'm new to this site. I do not know how to write.

I want to close the telephone connection. Please disconnect it as soon as possible.

Would you please check it and tell me how these can be written?

I would like to cancel my telephone service (or contract). Please disconnect my telephone line as soon as possible.

Thank you.