I want to learn poem, edit this please

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NewHope

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Fresh wind, though intended, could not make me to stay
Bright moon unconsciously shows any of us the WAY
 
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NewHope said:
Fresh wind, though intended, could not make me to stay
Bright moon unconsciously shows any of us the WAY
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Try,

...,could not make me stay

All the best, :D
 
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