I want to take you to the moon to dance while admiring the beautiful view of earth.

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Jit833

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I want to take you to the moon to dance while admiring the beautiful view of earth. (Can I use to dance?)

I am trying to write a love letter, I am not sure if I am saying it correctly. Please, I need help. :oops:
 

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Your sentence is OK grammatically but it's a little awkward.
Perhaps: "I want to dance with you on the moon as we enjoy the beautiful view of earth."
 
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