[Essay] I was driving and a bit tired.

[saloom2]

Hello everyone,

I want to ask how to write something in proper English. I was driving and a bit tired - I wasn't focusing at all, so I was about to meet with a terrible accident, but Ahmed let me nudged me to focus and got me off the hook.

I want to say that I was about to meet with a terrible accident but Ahmed told me I was going to hit it so I slowed down.

 

[MikeNewYork]

It is not too bad. Try this: I was driving and a bit tired - I wasn't focusing at all. I was about to have a terrible accident, but Ahmed nudged me to wake me up.

 

[Rover_KE]

I have changed your title, saloom.

You know the guidelines.