I went to an amusement park. I bought a band for RS 2000. I

tufguy

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I went to an amusement park. I bought a band for RS 2000. I had to put that band on to ride on any ride for any number of times. There were other bands as well that were cheaper. The people who had those bands were not allowed to get on all the rides. They had the permission to ride a limited number of rides for a limited number of times.

Shall I say "I started getting on rides" or "I started riding the rides (like roller coaster)"?

Please check my sentences.
 

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I went to an amusement park. I paid [STRIKE]bought a band for[/STRIKE] RS 2000 [STRIKE]. I had to put that[/STRIKE] and was given a wristband which entitled me to unlimited [STRIKE]on to ride on any[/STRIKE] rides there. [STRIKE]for any number of times.[/STRIKE] There were cheaper deals [STRIKE]other bands as well[/STRIKE] that [STRIKE]were cheaper. The people who had those bands were not[/STRIKE] allowed [STRIKE]to get on all the[/STRIKE] limited access to the rides. [STRIKE]They had the permission to ride a limited number of rides for a limited number of times.[/STRIKE]

[STRIKE]Shall I say "I started getting[/STRIKE] I went on several rides [STRIKE]" or "I started riding the rides (like[/STRIKE] including the roller coaster.

Please check my sentences.
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