[General] I would like to know if this is a correct thesis statement

[sadie021309]

I am in college and I have trouble with thesis statements


Because so many adults and children are affected each year with cancer, adults and children must understand the disease.

 

[Raymott]

I am in college and I have trouble with thesis statements


Because so many adults and children are affected each year with cancer, adults and children must understand the disease.

Yes, that is a possible thesis statement.