If you work night shifts then your whole body routine gets distorted.

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If you work night shifts then your whole body routine gets distorted. You do each and every thing the other way around. Like when people sleep you wake up or when they eat you sleep etc. So you do every thing opposite of what they do.

Could you please check my sentences?
 

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Consider using "daily routine" in describing the above situation.
 

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Consider using "daily routine" in describing the above situation.

If you work night shifts then your daily routine gets distorted. You do each and every thing the other way around. Like when people sleep you wake up or when they eat you sleep etc. So you do every thing opposite of what they do.
 

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If you work night shifts then your daily routine gets distorted.

A comma is missing from that sentence.

Like when people sleep you wake up or when they eat you sleep etc.
You can improve on "like" in that sentence. Again, you need better punctuation there.

So you do every thing opposite of what they do.
That's not well written and is repetitive. Leave it out.
 

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I'm not sure if you're referring to someone's daily routine or to their body clock.
 

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A comma is missing from that sentence.


You can improve on "like" in that sentence. Again, you need better punctuation there.


That's not well written and is repetitive. Leave it out.


If you work night shifts, then your whole body routine gets distorted. You do each and every thing the other way around. Like, when people sleep you wake up or when they eat you sleep etc. So, you do everything opposite of them.

Could you please check my sentences?
 

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I'm not sure if you're referring to someone's daily routine or to their body clock.

I was referring to their daily routine. These two are interrelated. Am I correct?
 
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