If you work night shifts, then your whole body routine gets distorted

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tufguy

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If you work night shifts, then your whole body routine gets distorted. You do each and every thing the other way around. Like, when people sleep you wake up or when they eat you sleep etc. So, you do everything opposite of them.

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If you work night shifts, [STRIKE]then[/STRIKE] your whole body routine gets distorted. You do [STRIKE]each and[/STRIKE] everything the other way around. [STRIKE]Like,[/STRIKE] When other people sleep you wake up, [STRIKE]or[/STRIKE] when they eat you sleep, etc. So, you do everything opposite [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] to them.
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As an exercise, look for the word or in everything you write and try to remove it. There's nothing wrong with or​ as such, but you use it too often. :)
 

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If you work night shifts, then your whole body routine gets distorted. You do each and everything the other way around. [STRIKE]Like,[/STRIKE] When people sleep, you wake up; and [STRIKE]or[/STRIKE] when they eat, you sleep, etc. So, you do everything opposite [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] to them.
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Each and everything doesn't work for me. It should be each and every thing, where "each" and "every" both modify "thing".
 

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Quite right. I don't know what I was thinking with that one. :oops: :up:
 
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