In his memoirs the famous actor

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct. I am not sure about the second part of my sentence after "him." I was not sure what punctuation to use and used a comma, but I am not sure if that is correct.

In his memoirs the famous actor dispels the myth of a caring and kind husband and reveals the dark side of him, as the jealous bully who terrorised all his family.
 

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I am wondering if my sentence is grammatically correct. I am not sure about the second part of my sentence after "him." I was not sure what punctuation to use and used a comma, but I am not sure if that is correct.

In his memoirs, the famous actor dispels the myth [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] that he is/was a caring and kind husband, and reveals [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] his dark side [STRIKE]of him, as the[/STRIKE] - a jealous bully who terrorised [STRIKE]all[/STRIKE] his entire/whole family.

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