including swimming, walking briskly and jogging.

[Sarah-Betty]

Are these two sentences OK?

I am really fond of doing aerobic exercise including swimming, walking briskly and jogging.
I am really fond of doing aerobic exercise which includes swimming, walking briskly and jogging.

 

[emsr2d2]

Are these two sentences OK?

I am really fond of doing aerobic exercise, including swimming, walking briskly and jogging.
I am really fond of doing aerobic exercise, which includes swimming, walking briskly and jogging.

See above. With the addition of a comma, they're OK. I would probably say "I really like doing aerobic exercise, such as swimming, brisk walking, and jogging."

I prefer "I really like" to "I am really fond of". We tend to use "fond of" when referring to other people - I'm really fond of my cousin.