including swimming, walking briskly and jogging.

Status
Not open for further replies.

Sarah-Betty

Member
Joined
Oct 2, 2017
Member Type
Student or Learner
Native Language
Armenian
Home Country
Armenia
Current Location
Iran
Are these two sentences OK?

I am really fond of doing aerobic exercise including swimming, walking briskly and jogging.
I am really fond of doing aerobic exercise which includes swimming, walking briskly and jogging.
 

emsr2d2

Moderator
Staff member
Joined
Jul 28, 2009
Member Type
English Teacher
Native Language
British English
Home Country
UK
Current Location
UK
Are these two sentences OK?

I am really fond of doing aerobic exercise, including swimming, walking briskly and jogging.
I am really fond of doing aerobic exercise, which includes swimming, walking briskly and jogging.

See above. With the addition of a comma, they're OK. I would probably say "I really like doing aerobic exercise, such as swimming, brisk walking, and jogging."

I prefer "I really like" to "I am really fond of". We tend to use "fond of" when referring to other people - I'm really fond of my cousin.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Top