Drago
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- Apr 23, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- Peru
- Current Location
- Peru
Hello friends, i need some help with this letter , well you´ll see I am from Perú and i´m studying english in Britanico (Asociación Peruano- Britanico ) and i need to present this letter to a my teacher in order to pass advanced 01 to advanced 02, here is what i´ve done , i know there are some mistakes to correct. please take a look ....:-D
hi alex
thanks for writing to me, it was great to hear from you after so many months
It’s really good news that you’ve won some money as i know in your last letter, you successfully have passed your exam, !well done!, i´m badly giving advice but i´ll try.
in my opinion, my mom tell me every time i want to buy clothes that just wait for the next coming station, people usually do the same in order to get low prices from all kind of outfits, about computergames i usually see things like how many stars do the game have ? with excellent background music, sophisticated graphics, etc.
There´s one videogame which has five stars reviews and also if you buy it they´ll giving an exclusive one year of premiun service so you can download new characters, weapons maps and even new games apart from the one you have which is awesome , then buying new clothes from popular brands, is rather expensive,isn´t it? , it´s not the best idea to buy something like that.
if i were you i would buy a new computergame. i would really recomend that to you, people enjoy spending almost all it´s money just for fun.
hope to hear from you soon
luis
hi alex
thanks for writing to me, it was great to hear from you after so many months
It’s really good news that you’ve won some money as i know in your last letter, you successfully have passed your exam, !well done!, i´m badly giving advice but i´ll try.
in my opinion, my mom tell me every time i want to buy clothes that just wait for the next coming station, people usually do the same in order to get low prices from all kind of outfits, about computergames i usually see things like how many stars do the game have ? with excellent background music, sophisticated graphics, etc.
There´s one videogame which has five stars reviews and also if you buy it they´ll giving an exclusive one year of premiun service so you can download new characters, weapons maps and even new games apart from the one you have which is awesome , then buying new clothes from popular brands, is rather expensive,isn´t it? , it´s not the best idea to buy something like that.
if i were you i would buy a new computergame. i would really recomend that to you, people enjoy spending almost all it´s money just for fun.
hope to hear from you soon
luis
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