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Winwin2011

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Are the following sentences natural in a reply email?

Thank you for your enquiry. In order hat we can introduce our services that are suitable for your needs, please provide the following information by filing in the table below.
 
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Winwin2011 said:
Are the following sentences natural in a reply email?

Thank you for your enquiry. In order [STRIKE]that we can introduce our[/STRIKE] for us to ascertain which of our services [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] are suitable for your needs, please provide [STRIKE]the following[/STRIKE] some/further information by filing in the table below.
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See above.
 
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