Invitation for meet up

Yueehs

Junior Member
Joined
May 2, 2020
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Student or Learner
Native Language
Malay
Home Country
Malaysia
Current Location
Singapore
Hi, I would appreciate it if someone can help me by editing this email.


Dear Sarah,

Thanks for coming for the first interview. We enjoyed listening to your story and wish to know more about you.

After some discussion with the management, my directors decide to meet up with you in our office at the following details:

Date: 29 July 2021 (Thu)
Time: 2.30pm
Location: 51st Pandan Road, 02-00, 128453.

Kindly reply to this email to acknowledge.
 

Yankee

Key Member
Joined
Sep 13, 2013
Member Type
Retired English Teacher
Native Language
English
Home Country
United States
Current Location
United States
Hi, I would appreciate it if someone can help me by editing this email.


Dear Sarah,

Thanks for [STRIKE]coming for[/STRIKE] visiting us for the first interview. We enjoyed [STRIKE]listening to[/STRIKE] hearing your story and [STRIKE]wish[/STRIKE] would like to know more about you.

[STRIKE]After some discussion with the management, my[/STRIKE] Our directors [STRIKE]decide[/STRIKE] would like to meet [STRIKE]up[/STRIKE] with you in our office at the [STRIKE]following details[/STRIKE] date and time indicated:

Date: 29 July 2021 (Thu)
Time: 2.30pm
Location: 51st Pandan Road, 02-00, 128453.

[STRIKE]Kindly reply to this email to acknowledge[/STRIKE] Please advise if you can attend. Thank you.

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