Is it correct to write like this? Please advise,thx teachers

[Helped Wanted]

Some of us played games and some of us took a nap.

If it is not correct, how should I correct the sentence above?

Thank you, teachers! ^o^

 

[RonBee]

Re: Is it correct to write like this? Please advise,thx teac

Some of us played games and some of us took a nap.

Yes, that is good. However, I suggest using a comma after games. You could also say:

• Some of us played games, and some of us napped.

 

[Helped Wanted]

Thank you soooo much for helping, teacher Ronbee! ^o^

 

[RonBee]

You're very welcome.