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Annecy

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Please note that the two forty feet containers which you scheduled for tiles, which can't carry all the fifty pallets due to the overweight.
As an urgency, we are going to use the third container (1x20') which you scheduled for the Joinery items, for the balance materials of tiles, details are as follows.
Note that these three containers should go under one Bill of lading with one packing list. So. please inform the forwarding agency about these changes which we made already.
 

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Please note that the two forty-foot containers which you [STRIKE]scheduled for[/STRIKE] booked to transport tiles, [STRIKE]which[/STRIKE] can't carry all [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] fifty pallets due to the [STRIKE]over[/STRIKE]weight.
As an urgen
[STRIKE]cy[/STRIKE]t measure, we are going to use the third container (20 feet) which you [STRIKE]scheduled for[/STRIKE] booked to transport the [STRIKE]J[/STRIKE]joinery items, for the [STRIKE]balance materials[/STRIKE] remainder of the tiles. Details [STRIKE]are as[/STRIKE] follow[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE].
Note that these three containers should go under one Bill of Loading with one packing list.
[STRIKE]So.[/STRIKE] Please inform the forwarding agency about these changes, which we [STRIKE]made already[/STRIKE] have already put into effect.

My suggestions are above, in red.
 
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