Is it correct?

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MAJSH

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As his passport doesn't has enough pages, he needs to submit it for additional booklet. So, we will give you this document when he has finished with them.
 

Rover_KE

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As his passport doesn't have enough pages, he needs to submit it for an additional booklet. We will give you this document when he has finished with it.

I have only corrected the grammar. I don't know about the content - for example I'm not sure what 'this document' refers to.

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