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Ginger

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Hello teachers

Could you please correct the following sentenses if they are wrong or if they sound not too good:

This paper addresses the quality of the textbook dialogues in the foreign language classroom. It draws on using appropriate discourse markers so as to produce natural-sounding interactions.

Many thanks!
G.
 

Tdol

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I'd remove 'using' in the second sentence.;-)
 

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Ginger said:
Hello teachers

Could you please correct the following sentenses if they are wrong or if they sound not too good:

This paper addresses the quality of the textbook dialogues in the foreign language classroom. It draws on using appropriate discourse markers so as to produce natural-sounding interactions.

Many thanks!
G.
In addition, you may want to consider deleting 'the':

the textbook dialogues
 
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