Is it correct?

[Ginger]

Hello teachers

Could you please correct the following sentenses if they are wrong or if they sound not too good:

This paper addresses the quality of the textbook dialogues in the foreign language classroom. It draws on using appropriate discourse markers so as to produce natural-sounding interactions.

Many thanks!
G.

 

[Tdol]

I'd remove 'using' in the second sentence.;-)

 

[Casiopea]

Hello teachers

Could you please correct the following sentenses if they are wrong or if they sound not too good:

This paper addresses the quality of the textbook dialogues in the foreign language classroom. It draws on using appropriate discourse markers so as to produce natural-sounding interactions.

Many thanks!
G.

In addition, you may want to consider deleting 'the':

the textbook dialogues