Is it possible to say this?

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Solver

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Dear Teachers,

Does it work?
"Website Security Audit and Protection Services " if we are speaking about a company that scan websites, detect viruses, clean up websites from viruses and then setup protection

Thank you!
 

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Dear teachers,

Does [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] this work?

"Website Security, Audit and Protection Services" if we are speaking about a company that scans websites, detects viruses, [STRIKE]clean[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]up[/STRIKE] removes viruses from websites [STRIKE]from viruses[/STRIKE] and then [STRIKE]setup[/STRIKE] sets up virus protection.

Thank you!

See my amendments to your post. Your description of the company is rather wordy and long-winded. I would say that it is a company "which scans for, detects and removes viruses, and then sets up virus protection".
 

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Dear Teachers,

Does it work?
"Website Security Audit and Protection Services " if we are speaking about a company that scan websites, detect viruses, clean up websites from viruses and then setup protection

Thank you!

When I see "audit", I think of a financial review. In your example I would prefer "Website Security Assessment...... "
 
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