ali_dd
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Hi,
Is use of "is" in the following sentence correct grammatically and conceptually? If it is not, kindly suggest ways to make it clearer.
In present work, proposed design (variable thickness blade) has a higher efficiency than the original design (constant thickness blade) at the high flow coefficient (ϕ=0.275). By using such a Wells turbine, the cleaner air in the environment will be created because the amount of fossil fuels consumption and air pollution is decreased more at the high flow coefficient in order to produce the electrical energy.
Is use of "is" in the following sentence correct grammatically and conceptually? If it is not, kindly suggest ways to make it clearer.
In present work, proposed design (variable thickness blade) has a higher efficiency than the original design (constant thickness blade) at the high flow coefficient (ϕ=0.275). By using such a Wells turbine, the cleaner air in the environment will be created because the amount of fossil fuels consumption and air pollution is decreased more at the high flow coefficient in order to produce the electrical energy.