Is the caption written correctly?

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KLPNO

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Hello everyone

I'd like to ask if the following caption (in a report) sounds good in English:

Recommendations by managers of functional divisions for the T&D department for optimizing employees' teaching process at Soft Skills training.
 

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teaching process- are the employees the teachers?
Soft Skills training- is Soft Skills the compnay doing the training? If not, then you could capitalise training as part of the course name.
 

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teaching process- are the employees the teachers?
Soft Skills training- is Soft Skills the compnay doing the training? If not, then you could capitalise training as part of the course name.
No, the employees are taught at this training.

Should I use 'educational process' in this case?
 
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