Tan Elaine
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- Jun 29, 2008
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Getting back to Jason, he seemed to be cured of his cancer. However, seven months later, he suddenly died of the disease.
1. Is "Getting back" correct in the sense of talking about Jason when he was mentioned earlier in the story. If not, how should I phrase it?
2. Is "his" needed?
3. Are there any other errors in the sentence?
Thanks in advance.
1. Is "Getting back" correct in the sense of talking about Jason when he was mentioned earlier in the story. If not, how should I phrase it?
2. Is "his" needed?
3. Are there any other errors in the sentence?
Thanks in advance.