is there any grammatical error in this application

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GBEMY

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APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF A xxxxx

With reference to your advertisement in the national Newspaper recently, I hereby apply for the above-mentioned position. I am a Computer Science graduate, Microsoft Certified Systems Engineer (MCSE), and also a Microsoft Office Specialist (MOS) with over 8-year related experience mostly in all Information Technology fields. I know that my practical knowledge, skills and paper qualifications would be of benefits to the operation of the company.



My CV is attached to this email for your perusal and consideration.

I hope to hear your favourable response soon.
 

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APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF A xxxxx

With reference to your advertisement in the national newspaper (I think you should name the newspaper) recently, I hereby apply for the above-mentioned position. I am a Computer Science graduate, Microsoft Certified Systems Engineer (MCSE), and also a Microsoft Office Specialist (MOS) with over 8 years' related experience mostly in [STRIKE]all[/STRIKE] Information Technology fields. I know that my practical knowledge, skills and [STRIKE]paper[/STRIKE] qualifications would be of benefit to the operation of the company.


My CV is attached [STRIKE]to this email[/STRIKE] for your perusal and consideration.

I [STRIKE]hope to hear your favourable response soon.[/STRIKE] look forward to hearing from you.

Amendments above.
 
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