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[happys82]

Our goal is to help students get more knowledge through existing information. However, it needs high mental skills, such as: learning with understanding, dealing with unexpected situations and creating various scientific methods. Moreover, we aim to help students analyze the environment and the universe which they live from the scientific aspects.

 

[stitusandrews]

Our goal is to help students [STRIKE]get [/STRIKE]gain more knowledge through existing information. However, it needs high [STRIKE]mental [/STRIKE]intellectual skills, such as: learning with understanding, dealing with unexpected situations and creating various [STRIKE]scientific [/STRIKE] systematic methods. Moreover, [STRIKE]we[/STRIKE] our aim is to help students analyze the environment and the universe [STRIKE]which [/STRIKE] that they live from the scientific aspects.

Titus Andrews

 

[happys82]

Thanks a lot