is there any mistake?

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happys82

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[FONT=&quot]1.Moreover, we encourage students who have problems to express themselves to talk and carry out drama activities which help students use foreign language actively.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]2.We are waiting for you if you want to improve your language skills.[/FONT]
3.These are a few of the beauties that wait for you if you choose us.

4.We wish success to our students and welcome all music lovers in our club.
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[FONT=&quot]1.Moreover, we encourage students who have problems to express themselves to talk and carry out drama activities which help students use foreign language actively.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]2.We are waiting for you if you want to improve your language skills.[/FONT]
3.These are a few of the beauties that wait for you if you choose us.

4.We wish success to our students and welcome all music lovers in our club.
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Looks fine to me :up:
 
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[FONT=&quot]1.Moreover, we encourage students who have problems to express themselves to talk and carry out drama activities which help students use foreign language actively.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]2.We are waiting for you if you want to improve your language skills.[/FONT]
3.These are a few of the beauties that are waiting for you if you choose us.

4.We wish success to our students and welcome all music lovers in our club.
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It sounds more natural to me, but I might be wrong.
 
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