is there any mistake?

[happys82]

[FONT=&quot]1.Moreover, we encourage students who have problems to express themselves to talk and carry out drama activities which help students use foreign language actively.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]2.We are waiting for you if you want to improve your language skills.[/FONT]
3.These are a few of the beauties that wait for you if you choose us.

4.We wish success to our students and welcome all music lovers in our club.

https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/editpost.php?do=editpost&p=611488

 

[I'm still learning]

[FONT=&quot]1.Moreover, we encourage students who have problems to express themselves to talk and carry out drama activities which help students use foreign language actively.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]2.We are waiting for you if you want to improve your language skills.[/FONT]
3.These are a few of the beauties that wait for you if you choose us.

4.We wish success to our students and welcome all music lovers in our club.

Looks fine to me :up:

 

[fighting spirit]

[FONT=&quot]1.Moreover, we encourage students who have problems to express themselves to talk and carry out drama activities which help students use foreign language actively.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]2.We are waiting for you if you want to improve your language skills.[/FONT]
3.These are a few of the beauties that are waiting for you if you choose us.

4.We wish success to our students and welcome all music lovers in our club.

https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/editpost.php?do=editpost&p=611488

It sounds more natural to me, but I might be wrong.