Is this a correct sentence? Please help

[charnitha]

"Regarding your issue, still you are facing the computer slow issue or now normal. Please confirm. If this continues, I will connect your computer remotely and check the issue".

 

[emsr2d2]

"Regarding your issue, are you still [STRIKE]you are[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]facing[/STRIKE] experiencing the slow computer [STRIKE]slow[/STRIKE] issue or is it now running normally? Please confirm. If [STRIKE]this[/STRIKE] the problem continues, I will connect to your computer remotely and [STRIKE]check[/STRIKE] investigate the issue".

See above.

 

[Odessa Dawn]

"Regarding your issue, are you still you are facing experiencing the slow computer slow issue or is it now running normally? Please confirm. If this the problem continues, I will connect to your computer remotely and check investigate the issue".

Couldn't infinitive marker "to" work better than conjunction "and" over here?

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[5jj]

Couldn't infinitive marker "to" work better than conjunction "and" over here?

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It is possible, but it's not better.