Is this a grammatically correct passage

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gdonuts

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Sucre amd T bag will jump over the wall and michel will be close on their heels,sucre and t bag will have dumped their prison clothes in the nearby dumpsters but not michel ,everyone will be baffled as to why he doesn't just dump his clothes with the rest of them
 

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Sucre amd T bag will jump over the wall and michel will be close on their heels,sucre and t bag will have dumped their prison clothes in the nearby dumpsters but not michel ,everyone will be baffled as to why he doesn't just dump his clothes with the rest of them

Very breathless. Lack of capital letters makes it feel even more breathless. There are three discrete sentences here, not one overly complex one.


Sucre and T bag will jump over the wall and michel will be close on their heels
Michael or Michel or even Mitchell??

sucre and t bag will have dumped their prison clothes in the nearby dumpsters but not michel

everyone will be baffled as to why he doesn't just dump his clothes with the rest of them
 

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Thanks i appreciate that ...i'm trying to discern the line between poor construction and real grammatical errors that.s why im here in the first place...i naturally construct my sentences well but like to look for gray areas .anyway thanks for clearing that up...
 

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Thanks i appreciate that ...i'm trying to discern the line between poor construction and real grammatical errors that.s why im here in the first place...i naturally construct my sentences well but like to look for gray areas .anyway thanks for clearing that up...

Poor construction is an error :-?

Please note that in grammatical written English, capital letters in the correct places are necessary, and that correct punctuation is also necessary. If you would like guidance on these, do ask. ;-)
 

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Poor construction is an error :-?

Please note that in grammatical written English, capital letters in the correct places are necessary, and that correct punctuation is also necessary. If you would like guidance on these, do ask. ;-)


would that not be..grammatically wtirren..?
 
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