[Grammar] Is this content has a correct grammar

[seco]

I'm writing technical articles on a website.

just asking, is the following article has a correct grammar and accepted for English native speakers, I mean they can read it without problems.
I've done my best on that article and I need to know my weak points so I can avoid it.

Thanks in advance.

 

[teechar]

I'm writing technical articles on a website.

[STRIKE]just asking, is[/STRIKE] Can you please tell me if the following article [STRIKE]has a correct grammar[/STRIKE] is grammatical and acceptable [STRIKE]ed[/STRIKE] for native English [STRIKE]native[/STRIKE] speakers. I mean [STRIKE]they can read[/STRIKE] if you can follow it without problems.
I've done my best on that article and I need to know my weak points so I can avoid them in future. [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE].

Thanks in advance.

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